This week one of our writing tasks was to create a descriptive piece of writing about Autumn. For this we didn't have to make it too big, sort of like a poem. Here is my piece of writing.
Kia ora Rhys, I like the way you have used the Polar Bear's hibernation as part of your Autumn poem. THe hibernating animals must enjoy all the eating they do before the long winter sleep. The autumn leaf coloured background is perfect and the bold title looks great.
Kia ora Rhys, I like the way you have used the Polar Bear's hibernation as part of your Autumn poem. THe hibernating animals must enjoy all the eating they do before the long winter sleep. The autumn leaf coloured background is perfect and the bold title looks great.
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