Last week Miss Reissmann The Mamaku 1 teacher had her birthday so Mamaku 1 decided to do a description about her. here is mine. [ I did this in a different font but blogger didn't let me do it :( ]
Helga Reissmann
There once was a woman called Helga Reissmann. she is 50 years old and has 3 children. Her hair is blonde like a lion's mane. Her eyes are light blue like the sky. she is quite tall and thin. She has a silver bar in her ear with little balls at the end as silver as a star in the night sky. She Wears black jeans with a black long sleeve
t shirt and a jacket over it. She also has square black glasses and a oval face. Her face colour is about this font colour.
Thanks for reading :)
Hi Rhys, you have described Miss Reissmann's physical appearance well. When we are describing people it is also good to include interesting stories about them and details about their personality as well to give a more complete picture to your reader. Perhaps this wuld be a good next step for you in descriptive writing. Mrs P
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