Friday, 31 March 2017

Literacy Reflections Week 9 Term 1

Writing
WALT: Write a clear detailed paragraphs with bullet points.
WALT:write a clear and detailed introduction using the 5 W's

Intro:
2 weeks ago on the 8th-10th March, Mamaku 2 met at the tech centre at 9.00 to get ready to go on camp. We went to West port for camp and our first stop was Mitchell’s Gully Gold Mine. We went with Mrs Prendergast and Mr B. I think that we went on camp to give students the camp experience.

WALT: Write a clear detailed paragraphs with bullet points.

P1 Where
  1. M2 went to West port for camp and we stayed at the Gage university centre. So when we went to the pool it was only 3 blocks away.

P2 Why
  1. So we could see what camping is like. Also if they haven't been to westport before.

P3 when
  1. M2 was at the tech centre at 9.00 on the 8th of march ready to leave and we came back at 2.40 on the 10th of march

P4 who
  1. Mamaku 2 Mrs Prendergast and Mr B went on mamaku 2’s camp.



P5 what
Our first stop was Mitchell’s gully. Then we went to Nile river for a swim and morning tea. Then we went to the Seal colony to see the seals one was so close to me. Then we went to the Gage university centre to relax.
After relaxing we walked to the Pool.
(next day)

In the morning we went to the Museum to look at all the cool things. After that it was the Denniston coal mine. While we were at denniston we did the Denniston walk. Then we had some Lunch. Then we went back to the Gage centre to get our breath back after that exhausting day. Then we went to the Pool again after we were ready to leave we went back to the Gage centre





Word Work
Unhelpful
Isn’t doing anything/not helping
You are unhelpful

Predict
to declare or tell in advance
I predict he will...

Direct
to manage or guide by advice
That was a direct hit

Develop
to bring out the capabilities or possibilities
I have to develop this.

Inhabit
to live or dwell in a place, as people or animals
I  have inhabited this.

Permanent
existing perpetually everlasting, especially without significant change.
This is a permanent marker


Thankful
feeling or expressing gratitude appreciative.
I am thankful for...

Occupy
to take or fill up space, time, etc.
Go and occupy time.

Consider
to think carefully about, especially in order to make a decision
I will consider that.

Object
anything that is visible or tangible and is relatively stable in form.
This is a large object

Constant
not changing or varying uniform regular invariable
You did that constantly.



This is my word work for the week. I did this on a google doc. I have done all of page 2 on level 5. I hope you like my work for week 9 


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