April Fools!
I was happily sleeping and I woke up to no sound, no one sleeping I
couldn’t hear anything. I thought for a second, how is this possible,
I got up and tried to open my door but it was locked, glued solid to
the frame. Okay I’m starting to get scared. Little did I know my
family were playing a prank on me , while I was as scared as a mouse
under a mutt’s muzzle. I went over to my window and opened my
curtains and… ah ermm, a normal day? This doesn’t make any sense.
I tried to open my door again and... open??? Wait ... what … how.
A smell of bacon and pancakes punches me in the nose, this can’t be
right. I enter the lounge I see mum cooking and dad on the couch,
good morning they say at the same time, I say it back. I slap myself
in the face hoping it wouldn’t be real, OOOWWW oh no IT’S
REAL!
couldn’t hear anything. I thought for a second, how is this possible,
I got up and tried to open my door but it was locked, glued solid to
the frame. Okay I’m starting to get scared. Little did I know my
family were playing a prank on me , while I was as scared as a mouse
under a mutt’s muzzle. I went over to my window and opened my
curtains and… ah ermm, a normal day? This doesn’t make any sense.
I tried to open my door again and... open??? Wait ... what … how.
A smell of bacon and pancakes punches me in the nose, this can’t be
right. I enter the lounge I see mum cooking and dad on the couch,
good morning they say at the same time, I say it back. I slap myself
in the face hoping it wouldn’t be real, OOOWWW oh no IT’S
REAL!
- I have used simile, metaphor, Alliteration, personification, and
- onomatopoeia
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Hey Rhys, I really want to read your story but its gone off the page. Can you please check your formatting? I'm sorry I don't know how to fix.
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