Thursday 28 March 2019

Brunner mine poems

This week a lot of our work has been Brunner mine based like the poem that I have just finished after doing some draft poems and language features like personification, metaphors, similes, rhymes, alliteration and onomatopoeia. Here is my poem.


Enjoy it? Let me know.

2 comments:

  1. Great work Rhys. I like your use of the language feature, Rhyme. Good on you.

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