Kia ora Rhys. I love your letter to your parents it was so thoughtful . I also love how you added all the things you miss doing with your mum and dad. What else did you learn about the war? This is a link to my blog. Please come and have a look at my learning. From Fehi.
Hi Rhys I am so happy that you posted your first blog post. I started my own blog too. Do you like your having your own blog? Do you like to work a lot at school?I like your work.I like that you talk about you writing. Well done. By Lyu.
I really like your work because your letter is so kind to your parents. When we did our writing about the ANZAC war we baked cookies and pretended to eat the cookies in trenches. Next time could you check your writing and reread it until it makes sense .
Hi Rhys, Congratulations! Rhys nice first blog post. I really like your letter to your mum and dad. In the comments below can you tell me what else you learned about the ANZAC war. Keep up the great work!
Well done Rhys. Great first blog post. I really like your letter to your Mum and Dad. What else did you learn about war? Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Rhys. I love your letter to your parents it was so thoughtful . I also love how you added all the things you miss doing with your mum and dad. What else did you learn about the war? This is a link to my blog. Please come and have a look at my learning. From Fehi.
ReplyDeleteHi Rhys I am so happy that you posted your first blog post. I started my own blog too. Do you like your having your own blog? Do you like to work a lot at school?I like your work.I like that you talk about you writing. Well done.
ReplyDeleteBy Lyu.
Talofa lava Rhys,
ReplyDeleteI really like your work because your letter is so kind to your parents. When we did our writing about the ANZAC war we baked cookies and pretended to eat the cookies in trenches. Next time could you check your writing and reread it until it makes sense .
Other than that, Great work!
Sincerely Gargee
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Kia ora Rhys.Your work is amazing.One thing you can do is add some adjectives to describe the war.How did you feel when you wrote that letter?
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ReplyDeleteCongratulations! Rhys nice first blog post. I really like your letter to your mum and dad. In the comments below can you tell me what else you learned about the ANZAC war. Keep up the great work!
Hi Rhys
ReplyDeleteHow did you get the great idea? Great job with the blog keep the great work!
from jay
Hi Rhys I like your art work it is very good I like the blending in it it looks good with the silhouette.
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